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Olivia by Paradox - CEM17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “CEM”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Business”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 160 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 11 characters.
337 characters.
Enough substance
1,591 characters.
2 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
2.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.45 average.
32 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
31 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
441 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
35 languages.
25 MB.
Reasonable download size
185 MB.