Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Hy-Vee
My Price Chopper6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Vee”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 285 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 272 characters.
2,140 characters.
Enough substance
653 characters.
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.20 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.59 average.
20,319 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
13,670 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
Generic notes: “Improved app stability, fixed Favorites removal, and simplified order-…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and Improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
90 MB.
Reasonable download size
73 MB.