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F2Pool
Avalon Family6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The largest comprehensive pool”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 324 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 13 characters.
1,076 characters.
Enough substance
534 characters.
6 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.96 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
1.66 average.
183 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
80 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 79 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 254 days ago.
Generic notes: “Implemented bug fixes and feature optimizations.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “1. Support Avalon Q”
3 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
59 MB.
Reasonable download size
58 MB.