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Hallow: Prayer & Meditation
Pray, Rosary, Catholic Bible
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Prayer & Meditation”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Catholic Bible”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Pray, Rosary, Catholic Bible”
Has a subtitle
“Mass Readings, Rosary, Saints”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 41 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 30 characters.
3,993 characters.
Enough substance
3,365 characters.
22 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.89 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.92 average.
378,212 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
90,732 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 50 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
Release notes say something
107 characters of release notes.
7 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
193 MB.
Reasonable download size
194 MB.