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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Narvata: Sales Tracker
Inventory, Customers, Expenses
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Sales Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Inventory, Customers, Expenses”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 120 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 224 characters.
2,115 characters.
Enough substance
1,679 characters.
3 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.25 average.
786 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
652 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
194 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Fixed a bug that caused QR codes to display incorrectly”
4 languages.
Localised listing
17 languages.
31 MB.
Reasonable download size
56 MB.