Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Pilot Logbook”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Best Logbook App for Pilots”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “logbook”, “pilots”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 48 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 218 characters.
3,379 characters.
Enough substance
2,286 characters.
98 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.29 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
7 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 64 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 7 days ago.
462 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
62 MB.
Reasonable download size
76 MB.