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Perpay - Shop and Build Credit
Ava: Build Credit FastPerpay - Shop and Build Credit
Shop, pay later, build credit
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shop and Build Credit”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Build Credit Fast”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shop, pay later, build credit”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “shop”, “build”, “credit”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 106 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 247 characters.
1,783 characters.
Enough substance
3,531 characters.
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.93 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.90 average.
21,387 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
50,254 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
4 languages.
43 MB.
Reasonable download size
155 MB.