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Perpay - Shop and Build Credit
OneBlinc Cash AdvancePerpay - Shop and Build Credit
Shop, pay later, build credit
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shop and Build Credit”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shop, pay later, build credit”
Has a subtitle
“Early Paycheck. $50 up to $250”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “shop”, “build”, “credit”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 106 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 101 characters.
1,783 characters.
Enough substance
1,861 characters.
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.93 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.82 average.
21,387 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14,840 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 18 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “We've implemented a few UX updates, performance enhancements and bug f…”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
43 MB.
Reasonable download size
84 MB.