Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Commure Pro
AirStrip ONE11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Medical”
Has a subtitle
“Medical”
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
7/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 41 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 328 characters.
2,717 characters.
Enough substance
3,252 characters.
11 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.71 average.
10 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
28 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 24 days ago.
240 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
75 MB.
Reasonable download size
36 MB.