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Final Outpost
Life of Mellow13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Build. Manage. Survive.”
Has a subtitle
“Make the mellow village!”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “mellow”.
First paragraph is 41 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 38 characters.
2,083 characters.
Enough substance
380 characters.
9 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.04 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.04 average.
1,875 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9,321 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 18 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 885 days ago.
158 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Gameplay improvement”
16 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
279 MB.
Reasonable download size
276 MB.