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Final Outpost
To The Trenches13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Build. Manage. Survive.”
Has a subtitle
“WW1 Strategy • Endless Warfare”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 41 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 293 characters.
2,083 characters.
Enough substance
2,136 characters.
9 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.04 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.70 average.
1,875 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,191 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 18 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 71 days ago.
158 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Squished a lot of pesky trench bugs”
16 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
279 MB.
Reasonable download size
346 MB.