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Perpay - Shop and Build CreditPerpay - Shop and Build Credit
Shop, pay later, build credit
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Shop and Build Credit”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Rent to Own Furniture & More”
Has a subtitle
“Shop, pay later, build credit”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “shop”, “build”, “credit”.
First paragraph is 168 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 106 characters.
343 characters.
Enough substance
1,783 characters.
6 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
3.39 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.93 average.
130 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
21,387 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and other general enhancements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixes and improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
16 MB.
Reasonable download size
43 MB.