Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Global Coherence
Awakened Way16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Suzanne Giesemann”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 21 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 224 characters.
763 characters.
Enough substance
2,495 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 20 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
1 iPad screenshots.
3.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.69 average.
89 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
462 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 39 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
Generic notes: “UI Improvements and Enhancements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “App Updates/Fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
174 MB.
Reasonable download size
45 MB.