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Paint.ly: Color by Number
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Happy Number Coloring Book
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Color by Number”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone, which is fine at this brand size.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Happy Number Coloring Book”
Has a subtitle
“Pixel art coloring book game”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “number”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “coloring”, “game”.
First paragraph is 277 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 399 characters.
2,587 characters.
Enough substance
1,782 characters.
13 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
148,741 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,800,806 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 58 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
339 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
186 characters of release notes.
11 languages.
Localised listing
15 languages.
240 MB.
Reasonable download size
231 MB.