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iboChron - Work Time Tracker
Punch time clock - Flexishift28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Work Time Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Flexishift”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Flex hours tracker and worklog”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 434 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 192 characters.
2,135 characters.
Enough substance
1,989 characters.
22 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.68 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
41 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,984 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 42 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
301 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
22 languages.
Localised listing
9 languages.
71 MB.
Reasonable download size
94 MB.