Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Work Time Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Time Management, Timesheet App”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 434 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 354 characters.
2,135 characters.
Enough substance
3,810 characters.
22 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
16 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.68 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.11 average.
41 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 42 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 51 days ago.
301 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “* Bugfixes and improvements”
22 languages.
Localised listing
5 languages.
71 MB.
Reasonable download size
295 MB.