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Photo Collage Maker: InCollage
Editor, Grid, Picture Layout
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “InCollage”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “CollagePlus”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Editor, Grid, Picture Layout”
Has a subtitle
“Photo Collage, Grids & Layouts”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “collage”.
First paragraph is 57 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 133 characters.
3,250 characters.
Enough substance
3,146 characters.
14 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
26 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.85 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
9,863 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
781 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 7 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 13 days ago.
145 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
16 languages.
Localised listing
17 languages.
183 MB.
Reasonable download size
212 MB.