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Cardhop Contacts
Mesh: Contacts + CRM16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Contacts + CRM”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The contacts app you'll love”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “contacts”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 229 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 202 characters.
2,962 characters.
Enough substance
3,993 characters.
26 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.37 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.42 average.
1,135 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
764 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 19 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
475 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixes and performance improvements.”
7 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
101 MB.
Reasonable download size
204 MB.