Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
BuildOps: Commercial Trades
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Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only Fieldpiece Job Lin
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Commercial Trades”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 64 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 260 characters.
1,256 characters.
Enough substance
260 characters.
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
3.11 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.45 average.
476 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
512 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
252 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “We update the app regularly to improve your experience. This latest up…”
1 language.
Localised listing
12 languages.
206 MB.
Reasonable download size
142 MB.