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Giant Eagle
OLA - Online Auction11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Auction”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 78 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 465 characters.
1,484 characters.
Enough substance
912 characters.
17 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
83,621 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9,642 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 19 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Improved Delivery methods screen.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
166 MB.
Reasonable download size
42 MB.