Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Freedom: Screen Time Control
Block Apps. Stay Focused.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Block Apps & Focus”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Screen Time Control”.
Contains filler: “apps”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Focus & Limit Screen Time”
Has a subtitle
“Block Apps. Stay Focused.”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “focus”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 193 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 274 characters.
2,571 characters.
Enough substance
3,986 characters.
8 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 22 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.24 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.44 average.
6,201 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5,934 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 26 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
319 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
4 languages.
101 MB.
Reasonable download size
90 MB.