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Smart & Final
Cardenas Markets13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 177 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 260 characters.
478 characters.
Enough substance
816 characters.
4 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.57 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.02 average.
9,240 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
144 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 25 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 38 days ago.
Generic notes: “New features and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
155 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
119 MB.
Reasonable download size
37 MB.