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Police Simulator : Car Patrol28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Car Patrol”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 174 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 401 characters.
174 characters.
Enough substance
2,656 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.36 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
10,950 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,104 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 161 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 501 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bugs Fixed”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor changes”
8 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
319 MB.
Reasonable download size
2489 MB.