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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
GoSwim: Learn Better Technique
Commit Swimming - WorkoutsGoSwim: Learn Better Technique
Videos, Swim Data & Annotation
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Learn Better Technique”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Workouts”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Videos, Swim Data & Annotation”
Has a subtitle
“Swim Workout app for coaches”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “workout”.
First paragraph is 361 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 327 characters.
4,000 characters.
Enough substance
1,722 characters.
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.16 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.33 average.
44 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
18 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 30 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 121 days ago.
Generic notes: “Improvements and fixes.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
142 MB.
Reasonable download size
24 MB.