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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
GoSwim: Learn Better Technique
Commit Swimming - TeamGoSwim: Learn Better Technique
Videos, Swim Data & Annotation
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Learn Better Technique”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Team”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Videos, Swim Data & Annotation”
Has a subtitle
“Commit's team management app”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “commits”, “team”.
First paragraph is 361 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 309 characters.
4,000 characters.
Enough substance
1,918 characters.
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.16 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
1.00 average.
44 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 30 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 100 days ago.
Generic notes: “Improvements and fixes.”
Release notes say something
No release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
142 MB.
Reasonable download size
49 MB.