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Prenger Foods17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 369 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 142 characters.
697 characters.
Enough substance
454 characters.
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.18 average.
145 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
11 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 386 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 65 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
Release notes say something
326 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
60 MB.
Reasonable download size
62 MB.