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UBC Alumni
League - Better Benefits10/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Better Benefits”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Business”
Has a subtitle
“Business”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 385 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 132 characters.
385 characters.
Enough substance
1,544 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.61 average.
2 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
367 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 291 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 46 days ago.
Generic notes: “Various bug fixes and updates.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “We’ve made some performance updates and bug fixes to improve your Leag…”
1 language.
Localised listing
3 languages.
8 MB.
Reasonable download size
170 MB.