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25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “novels and more”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Let Stories Shine”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Let Stories Shine”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “let”, “stories”, “shine”.
First paragraph is 12 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 403 characters.
3,625 characters.
Enough substance
2,314 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.71 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.57 average.
12,039 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,494 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 52 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 619 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and stability improvements. Thanks for using our application…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Add new features and enhance experience”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
204 MB.
Reasonable download size
66 MB.