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Digital Planner – Task Journal15/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Task Journal”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The leading lesson planner”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 138 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 158 characters.
512 characters.
Enough substance
1,384 characters.
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.28 average.
7,584 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14,321 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 156 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Performance and stability improvements. - UI refinements for a more …”
Release notes say something
159 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
14 languages.
83 MB.
Reasonable download size
433 MB.