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OctoApp for OctoPrint/Klipper
Erhard Christian Wurthner
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 62 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 201 characters.
419 characters.
Enough substance
2,094 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
2 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
2.33 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.86 average.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,283 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 712 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Changed toe-in calculation from one side to both.”
Release notes say something
271 characters of release notes.
0 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
57 MB.
Reasonable download size
249 MB.