Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
tonies
Moonlite - Storytime ProjectorMoonlite - Storytime Projector
Bedtime Stories for Families
6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Storytime Projector”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“For Tonies, Tonieboxes & more.”
Has a subtitle
“Bedtime Stories for Families”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “tonies”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 159 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 217 characters.
852 characters.
Enough substance
1,437 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.59 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.87 average.
8,081 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
522 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
231 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Bug fixes & improvements”
3 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
87 MB.
Reasonable download size
93 MB.