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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Battlecruisers
To The Trenches14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Explosive Tactical 1v1 Duels”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 193 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 293 characters.
1,711 characters.
Enough substance
2,136 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.42 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.70 average.
373 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,189 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 7 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 71 days ago.
153 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Squished a lot of pesky trench bugs”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
812 MB.
Reasonable download size
346 MB.