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Knitting Buddy 2
Cross Stitch: Embroidery Maker16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Embroidery Maker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 221 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 151 characters.
1,936 characters.
Enough substance
1,461 characters.
6 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.69 average.
11 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
94 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 54 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes for pro users Bug fixes for saving data”
Release notes say something
139 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
11 languages.
114 MB.
Reasonable download size
93 MB.