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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
SmoothSwing
Swing Profile Golf AnalyzerSwing Profile Golf Analyzer
Swing Analysis & Training Aid
11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Swing Analysis & Training Aid”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “swing”.
First paragraph is 11 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 157 characters.
1,037 characters.
Enough substance
3,600 characters.
11 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
30 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.65 average.
11,377 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,599 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 6 days ago.
Generic notes: “General improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
1008 characters of release notes.
33 languages.
Localised listing
5 languages.
106 MB.
Reasonable download size
191 MB.