Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
SmoothSwing
Sparrow - Golf11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Golf”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Golf Shot Tracer & Golf GPS”
Has a subtitle
“#1 AI Golf Swing Analysis”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “golf”.
First paragraph is 11 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 17 characters.
1,037 characters.
Enough substance
973 characters.
11 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
11,382 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,557 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 331 days ago.
Generic notes: “General improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
397 characters of release notes.
33 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
106 MB.
Reasonable download size
649 MB.