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Ace Trace - Shot TrackerAce Trace - Shot Tracker
Golf Swing & Disc Shot Tracer
11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Shot Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Golf Shot Tracer & Golf GPS”
Has a subtitle
“Golf Swing & Disc Shot Tracer”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “shot”.
First paragraph is 11 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 48 characters.
1,037 characters.
Enough substance
2,234 characters.
11 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
17 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.29 average.
11,382 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,997 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 54 days ago.
Generic notes: “General improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixing and stability improvements”
33 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
106 MB.
Reasonable download size
150 MB.