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Post - Parcel Tracking App
Delivery & Parcel tracking
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Parcel Tracking App”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Delivery & Parcel tracking”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “parcel”, “tracking”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 525 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 402 characters.
3,629 characters.
Enough substance
2,677 characters.
12 bullet lines, 26 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
1.29 average.
115 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 52 days ago.
216 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
254 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
95 MB.
Reasonable download size
86 MB.