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27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Math & Reading Game”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Ready Connect for Students”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 101 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 219 characters.
3,662 characters.
Enough substance
565 characters.
31 bullet lines, 21 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
0/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
No screenshots.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.45 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.41 average.
11,409 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
22,651 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 55 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 37 days ago.
313 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
276 MB.
Reasonable download size
257 MB.