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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Forsaken World:Gods and Demons
Goddess: Primal Chaos30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Gods and Demons”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Primal Chaos”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The most popular Fantasy RPG”
Has a subtitle
“Awesome 3D Action MMORPG”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 415 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 155 characters.
2,141 characters.
Enough substance
1,768 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.44 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.27 average.
2,837 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,292 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 165 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
65 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Optimizations on the game experience.”
1 language.
Localised listing
3 languages.
1234 MB.
Reasonable download size
95 MB.