Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Forsaken World:Gods and Demons
Demon Hunter: Rebirth30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Gods and Demons”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Rebirth”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Original Idle-MMORPG”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 415 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 20 characters.
2,141 characters.
Enough substance
3,156 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.44 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.75 average.
2,837 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,660 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 165 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 393 days ago.
65 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “I. New events II. Some optimizations III. Some bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
8 languages.
1234 MB.
Reasonable download size
1348 MB.