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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
FarOut: Hike, Bike, Paddle
Offline GPS Trail Maps
14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Hike, Bike, Paddle”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Official Awol Guide PDF App”
Has a subtitle
“Offline GPS Trail Maps”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “guide”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 774 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 279 characters.
4,000 characters.
Enough substance
2,304 characters.
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
2.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.79 average.
20 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
26,657 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 326 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 17 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
1969 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
4 languages.
36 MB.
Reasonable download size
173 MB.