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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
The A.T. Guide
Dont Forget The Spoon - Hiking14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Hiking”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Official Awol Guide PDF App”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “guide”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 774 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 260 characters.
4,000 characters.
Enough substance
2,240 characters.
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
2.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.53 average.
20 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
36 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 326 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Bug Fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
36 MB.
Reasonable download size
76 MB.