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FollowUp App
Smart Glazier12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Productivity”
Has a subtitle
“Sync office and field teams”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 87 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 162 characters.
1,223 characters.
Enough substance
2,626 characters.
0 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
5 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 14 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 58 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes & performance Improvements”
Release notes say something
71 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
342 MB.
Reasonable download size
43 MB.