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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Fastin: Intermittent Fasting
Fasting Tracker & Diet AppFastin: Intermittent Fasting
Simple Weight Loss Tracker App
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Intermittent Fasting”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“Simple Weight Loss Tracker App”
Has a subtitle
“Simple Fast Timer 16:8 & 5:2”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 58 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 143 characters.
3,865 characters.
Enough substance
663 characters.
1 bullet lines, 20 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.62 average.
10,154 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
12,397 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 142 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 604 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Bug fixes and user experience optimized”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Hello, This release includes bug fixes and minor improvements. Greet…”
9 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
243 MB.
Reasonable download size
9 MB.