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Head Tracker
VatScope12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Head Tracking with your iPhone”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “head”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 272 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 75 characters.
2,635 characters.
Enough substance
494 characters.
16 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
2 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.21 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.84 average.
63 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,413 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 133 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
748 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
2 MB.
Reasonable download size
62 MB.