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Head Tracker
SimFly Pad12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Head Tracking with your iPhone”
Has a subtitle
“Checklist & record for sim fly”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “head”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 272 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 81 characters.
2,635 characters.
Enough substance
2,543 characters.
16 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
34 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
2 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.21 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
63 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
15 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 133 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
700 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
2 MB.
Reasonable download size
151 MB.