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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Peeps - Make New Friends
Hoop - make new friends24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Make New Friends”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “make new friends”.
Contains filler: “new”.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “new”.
“Find Friends Around the World”
Has a subtitle
“Meet real people & social chat”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “friends”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 69 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 7 characters.
2,479 characters.
Enough substance
1,163 characters.
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.49 average.
75,887 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
684,083 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 108 days ago.
Generic notes: “Smashed a few bugs and made the app smoother!”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Hey! :) We have improved the overall performance and did some bug fix…”
1 language.
Localised listing
12 languages.
138 MB.
Reasonable download size
200 MB.