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Tamara | Own your Dream
AlRajhi Mobile23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Own your Dream”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Pay in up to 24, No late fees”
Has a subtitle
“Finance”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
7/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 511 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 26 characters.
1,528 characters.
Enough substance
1,362 characters.
3 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.65 average.
58,655 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
333,523 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 14 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements to make your experience smoothe…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “General enhancements”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
212 MB.
Reasonable download size
232 MB.