Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Tamara | Own your Dream
Tabby: Send, spend and save23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Own your Dream”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Send, spend and save”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Pay in up to 24, No late fees”
Has a subtitle
“Take power over money”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 511 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 87 characters.
1,528 characters.
Enough substance
2,461 characters.
3 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
58,655 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
85,011 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 14 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements to make your experience smoothe…”
Release notes say something
178 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
212 MB.
Reasonable download size
396 MB.