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Body Measurements - StartFit
Body Size - Track & Measure28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “StartFit”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Track & Measure”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Gain Muscle or Lose Weight”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 175 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 195 characters.
2,233 characters.
Enough substance
3,665 characters.
7 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
16 bullet lines, 23 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.44 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.48 average.
16 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
67 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 150 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 166 days ago.
Generic notes: “General improvements.”
Release notes say something
337 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
24 languages.
74 MB.
Reasonable download size
53 MB.